This is my final project. It is called “I Saw It In a Movie.”
I knew I wanted to do a song instead of some kind of dance track or soundscape or something. I guess there were some elements of a soundscape in the song, but I wanted a definite melody and lyrics that I could then add to and play around with. I had written a kind of outline for this song over winter break, but most of the lyrics hadn’t been written- I only knew what I wanted the song to be about, more or less, and I had the majority of the melody sketched out (including the movie phrase, obviously). It took a while to get the lyrics finished, and once they were done I got my friend Raphael Shapiro to play the guitar for me. It’s an electric acoustic, so I was able to record it directly into Logic.
We recorded with a metronome, but the tempo didn’t exactly lock in, which was understandable because he was playing 3 over 2. Initially, I had written the song in 4/4, but it was tough to find a satisfying guitar song that filled up the space well enough, so I ended up keeping most of the instrumentation constant and simply putting the guitar and drums in 3. Because the tempo didn’t exactly match up, I couldn’t quantize the drums and other instruments like I would have normally done. I synthesized most of the instruments in Logic alone, but I used Reason as a Rewire slave for a couple of them. I applied a lot of effects in Logic, including reverb and filters.
In terms of structure, there’s basically only two parts: the kind of intro section of G to Am7 and then the main verse. If the intro is A and the verse is B, the form is A B B B A B. I thought it’d be interesting to start with more instrumentation on the first B then the second- normally, the first repeat of the verse adds some more instruments or grows musically. I thought it’d be cool to have it shrink, and then build in the third B. I’m not sure how effectively the third be works, however, because the vocal transition is a little rough. I put the vocals for the third B on two tracks, and then heavily filtered one of the tracks so that it ended up wavering, resonating, and panning back and forth underneath the normal vocal track. I’m not sure it works very well initially. My levels are also slightly off, so things get too loud and abrasive at points, but I’m not entirely sure the best way to smooth everything out- I’m not good enough with Logic yet. The second A kind of adds a break, and its instrumentation bleeds into the final B, which ideally means the momentum keeps up until the end. I like the second A and final B the best, I think… the vocals fade in and out so you can’t entirely here the full words at points. I like that.
My biggest influence in terms of genre, I guess, was pretty clearly ambient music. The guitar is slightly too loud and harsh for it to sound exactly how I want, but the limitations of recording just the electric output of an acoustic electric guitar necessarily means some of that softness is taken away. I want to create a space for the lyrics to kind of inhabit, a soundscape to frame them in. It should be a forward-moving song, and I think it is a pretty clear-cut song, but there’s a kind of swirling background to it that hopefully makes it wander a little bit. Had I longer than 4 minutes, I would have added more space to it. I considered getting rid of a B section to add the space in this version, but I decided against it ultimately. Not sure why. Ideally, I’d add a little bit more time before the lyrics come in, and more space in general. There’s a fair amount of space as it stands, I guess, with the extended chords at the end of the phrases, but I probably would have done some more instrumental stuff.